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More Nits [Re: Finalizing an Issue-204 CP]

From: 'Janina Sajka' <janina@rednote.net>
Date: Wed, 25 Apr 2012 01:45:49 -0400
To: Cynthia Shelly <cyns@microsoft.com>
Cc: John Foliot <john@foliot.ca>, "'Benjamin Hawkes-Lewis'" <bhawkeslewis@googlemail.com>, "'Laura Carlson'" <laura.lee.carlson@gmail.com>, "'HTML Accessibility Task Force'" <public-html-a11y@w3.org>, "'Joshue O Connor'" <joshue.oconnor@cfit.ie>, "'Judy Brewer'" <jbrewer@w3.org>, "david100@sympatico.ca" <david100@sympatico.ca>, "'Richard Schwerdtfeger'" <schwer@us.ibm.com>, "'James Nurthen'" <james.nurthen@oracle.com>, "'Leif Halvard Silli'" <xn--mlform-iua@xn--mlform-iua.no>, "'Jonas Sicking'" <jonas@sicking.cc>
Message-ID: <20120425054549.GG4688@sonata.rednote.net>
Found just a few more, a few new, a few old still there:

1.)	In the Summary a missing space between 'section' and 'to' :

"correct the hidden attribute sectionto bring it
   into conformance ..."

2.)	In the explanatory text following Use Cases Example 3, 'sighted'
is mispelled with an 'n' rather than an 'h' .

"... signted users who are exploring the input."

3.)	Missing 'i' in the word 'addition', the second word in the
paragraph that begins:

"In addtion, UAIG Section 5.5.1. State and Property Mapping Table
describes ..."

4.)	Mispelled 'accessibility' in the Positive Effects section,
second bullet:

"* Provides a simple, consistent way for UAs to hide content from
sighted users while exposing it to AT via the
       accessibiltiy API."

5.)	Mispelled 'accessibility' in the second sentence of the Risks section:

"Browsers will flatten that structure to a string and populate the
accessible name and
       description fields in the accessibiltiy API, which can cause a
       poor user experience ..."

6.)	Mispelled 'existing', this time one too many 'i's, <smile>, same
section next sentence which now reads:
"There
       have not been many reports of problems with this the exisiting
       <label> and aria-labelledby functionality with CSS
              display:none and visibility:hidden, but ..."


8.)	Same sentence as #7, seems some punctuation is missing following
the word 'this', in the phrase "problems with this'



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