Associated informative changes for proposal 2d

For proposal 2d, here are suggested changes to the informative text
(subject to the editor's discretion) to stay in sync with the
proposed normative changes.  Diffs are WRT version 1.275.

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In section 2
http://www.w3.org/2004/01/rdxh/spec.html#grddl-xml

1.
540,541c539,540
< <p>The <tt>glean_title.xsl</tt> resource specifies a function from
< XPath document nodes to RDF/XML documents, and hence to RDF graphs;
---
> <p>The <tt>glean_title.xsl</tt> resource specifies a function from XML
> document representations to RDF/XML documents, and hence to RDF
graphs;


2. Update the informative n3 mechanical rules as the editor sees fit.


3. 
582a588,595
> <p>For the purpose of determining what transformations should be
> applied, GRDDL uses the XPath node tree that would be obtained from
the
> XML document using only the processing required of a non-validating
> processor<a href="spec-2d.html#XML">[XML]</a>(section 5.1).&nbsp;
Thus,
> the determination of what transformations should be applied does not
> depend on the resolution of external DTDs, external entities or
> external schemas.&nbsp; <br>
> </p>


In section 6
http://www.w3.org/2004/01/rdxh/spec.html#txforms

4. 
1048c1061,1062
< <b>transformation property</b>, a function from XPath document nodes
---
> <b>transformation property</b>, a function from XML document
> representations


5.
1051c1065
< nodes. For example, use of <tt>xsl:message</tt> with
---
> representations. For example, use of <tt>xsl:message</tt> with


6. 
1124,1126c1138,1142
< <p>When an information resource is represented by an XML document, the
< corresponding XPath data model may not be fully determined, depending
< on, for example, whether an agent elaborates inclusions, parameter
---
> <p>When an information resource is represented by an XML document, and
> a transformation converts it to an XPath or other data model before
> operating on it, that data model may not be fully determined,
depending
> on, for example, whether the transformation elaborates inclusions,
> parameter


7. 
1134,1139c1150,1152
< <p>This specification is silent on the question of which XML
< processors are employed by or for GRDDL-aware agents. Whether or not
< processing of XInclude, XML Validity, XML Schema Validity, XML
< Signatures or XML Decryption take place is
< unspecified. There is no universal expectation that an XSLT
< processor will call on such processing before executing a GRDDL
---
> <p>There is no universal expectation that an XSLT version 1.0
> processor[<a href="#XSLT1">XSLT1</a>] will call on such processing
> before executing a GRDDL


8.
1145c1158,1162
< reference XInclude, DTDs, XML Schemas and so on.</p>
---
> reference XInclude, DTDs, XML Schemas and so on.&nbsp; Alternatively,
a
> transformation author wishing to have complete control over such
> processing may write the transformation in a language other than XSLT
> version 1.0&nbsp; that offers complete control of the
pre-processing.<br>
> </p>


9.
1148c1165,1166
< who wish their documents to be unambiguous when used with GRDDL should
---
> who wish their documents to be unambiguous when used with GRDDL and
> XSLT version 1.0 should


In section 10 (Normative References)
http://www.w3.org/2004/01/rdxh/spec.html#normativeRefs

10.
1574a1593,1603
>   <dt id="XML"><dt id="XML"><a name="XML"></a>XML</dt>
>   </dt>
>   <dd> <cite><a
href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2006/REC-xml-20060816">Extensible
> Markup Language (XML) 1.0 (Fourth Edition)</a></cite>, T Bray, J.
> Paoli, C. M. Sperberg-McQueen, E. Maler, F. Yergeau,
> Editors, W3C Recommendation, 16 August 2006,
> http://www.w3.org/TR/2006/REC-xml-20060816 . <a
>  href="http://www.w3.org/TR/xml"
>  title="Latest version of XML Path
>   Language (XPath) Version 1.0">Latest
> version</a> available at http://www.w3.org/TR/xml .</dd>




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