- From: Ghislain Atemezing <auguste.atemezing@eurecom.fr>
- Date: Wed, 03 Oct 2012 16:59:11 +0200
- To: Richard Cyganiak <richard@cyganiak.de>
- CC: Dave Reynolds <dave@epimorphics.com>, public-gld-wg@w3.org
Hi all, Thanks Richard for this GREAT review. While reading some of the points, I suggest to use some of your guidelines in the BP document. > 18. "Note on style": Rename to something like "Note on modelling style"; the current title suggests it's about typographic conventions in the document This section could be moved to the BP Doc, with a pointer to the ORG document?! > 21. General remark: The discussions of modelling alternatives, and when each alternative is more appropriate, and the use of SPARQL Construct to document equivalences between alternatives, are*great*. The same idea as in #18 above, regarding sections 5 and 6 of the current version of the document. Also I found two small typos: - In the abstract section, "organzations" instead of *organizations* - The property "org:originalOrganzation" instead of *org:originalOrganization* in section #11.1.2. In the section "Example", it is said: "This example provides a quick overview of how dcat might be used to an organization". Is it *dcat* ? or there will be a link also to the dcat vocab? Best, Ghislain -- Ghislain Atemezing EURECOM, Multimedia Communications Department 930, route des Colles, 06903 SophiaTech, Biot, France. e-mail: auguste.atemezing@eurecom.fr & ghislain.atemezing@gmail.com Tel: +33 (0)4 - 9300 8178 Fax: +33 (0)4 - 9000 8200 Web: http://www.eurecom.fr/~atemezin
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