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Editorial comments on HTTP Vocabulary in RDF 1.0

From: Philip Ackermann <philip.ackermann@fit.fraunhofer.de>
Date: Wed, 13 Apr 2011 14:07:26 +0200
Message-ID: <4DA591FE.40404@fit.fraunhofer.de>
To: public-earl10-comments@w3.org
Dear group,

some comments on <http://www.w3.org/TR/HTTP-in-RDF10/>.

1.2 Use Cases
"When provding machine-readable" --> "... providing ... "

"exchanged bewteen a client and a server" --> "... between ..."

"Web application.." --> "Web application."
(one instead of two dots)

"paramters exchanged" --> "parameters exchanged"

regards,
Philip

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