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Editorial comments on EARL 1.0 Schema (editor's draft)

From: Christophe Strobbe <Christophe.Strobbe@esat.kuleuven.be>
Date: Fri, 08 Apr 2011 15:58:13 +0200
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Dear ERT WG,

Below are a editorial few comments on
<http://www.w3.org/WAI/ER/EARL10/WD-EARL10-Schema-20090908>.

Status:
"Providing both subclasses an instances" -> "... classes and instances"
("an" -> "and")

2. Classes 
Example 1:
"Success Criteria 1.1.1 of..." -> "Success Criterion 1.1.1 of..."

2.2 Assertor class
foaf:mbox: "...the respnsible assertor" -> "... the responsible assertor"

Best regards,

Christophe 

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