- From: Karen Coyle via GitHub <sysbot+gh@w3.org>
- Date: Tue, 05 Nov 2019 11:57:12 +0000
- To: public-dxwg-wg@w3.org
I think my edits are in there, although there seem to be line number changes since I made my comments so I may have missed some.
I would really like to fix this run-on sentence:
>This specification provides functional profiles of the abstract model for two environments: HTTP and human browser (Query String
Arguments) as well as a functional profile that specifies a single action - confirming which profile(s) a server response conforms to -
that is relevant to multiple environments, such as the HTTP and human browser environments.
and suggest (if the concepts have been captured):
This specification provides functional profiles of the abstract model for two environments: HTTP and human browser (Query String
Arguments). It also provides a functional profile that has the single function to respond with which profile(s) a server response conforms to, and which can be used in both environments.
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