Re: Please check the updates we did on BP document

Thanks Phil and editors…
Happy that helped.


Ghislain 

> Le 29 avr. 2016 à 13:10, Phil Archer <phila@w3.org> a écrit :
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> Thanks Ghislain, I've worked through the doc to fix these, pls see inline below.
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> On 29/04/2016 10:10, Ghislain Atemezing wrote:
>> Dear editors,
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>> Thanks again for your hard work.
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>>> Le 28 avr. 2016 à 22:51, Caroline Burle <cburle@nic.br> a écrit :
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>>> thank you again for your very important contributions to the DWBP document[1].
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>> I’ve just spotted some few typos now that I was re-reading the draft (version 9 April, 2016). They are more like minor typos and suggestions.
>> Sorry if this come late. Please see below:
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>> 1- Introduction:
>>  - s/domains &applications/domains & applications
> Fixed
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>>  - Add "open" in "other formats such as CSV"
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> Added
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>> 4- Context
>>  - Remove "data" in "it is important to adopt data vocabularies" ?
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> Removed
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>> 5- Namespaces
>>  - cnt' IRI is not <http://www.w3.org/2011/content#> <http://www.w3.org/2011/content#> ?
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> Surprisingly, it is. It is versioned, previous versions have different years in their URIs.
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>> 8.1:
>> - Highlight the example? maybe in italic?
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> I've applied the Example CSS (and suppressed the counter).
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> @Editors, I also changed the title to *Running* example. Hope that's OK. It's more in line with what we mean.
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>> - Add the ref of Turtle serialization in "RDF examples of the application of some BP are shown using Turtle"
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> Done
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>> Example 2:
>>  [General suggestion: Would it be good to *always* put the lang tag when using dct:title, skos:prefLabel and dct:description ?!]
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> Hmm, I'm happy either way. Open to persuasion. But I haven't implemented this change.
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>> - Machine-readable:
>>   * That's for native English speaker. I see some spaces before ponctuation: e.g., "mobility ." themes ."
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> Fixed, thanks.
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>> BP3:
>> - s/locale/local in "provide locale" or "providing locale parameters" or "locale information" ?
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> Nope, locale is correct. A locale is a place (a noun), local is an adjective. So we're saying here it's important to say where the data came from.
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>> 8.5:
>>  - Missing link to reference [VOCAB-DQV] in the description of the "Data Quality" section?
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> Fixed.
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>> 8.6:
>>  - s/"it should to be added"/"it should be added"
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> Fixed.
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>> 8.7:
>>  - Consistent use of "MyCity", not "My City" nor "my city" in BP12
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> Fixed.
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>> 8.13:
>>  - Missing link to [VOCAB-DUV] in BP29.
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> Fixed.
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> Thanks Ghislain - there were some very tricky catches in there. Much appreciated.
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> @Editors - pull request issued.
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> Phil
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>> HTH.
>> Cheers,
>> 
>> Ghislain
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