Re: Please check the updates we did on BP document

Thanks a lot Ghislain and Phil!

I just made the merge [1].


Cheers,
Berna

[1] http://w3c.github.io/dwbp/bp.html

2016-04-29 8:10 GMT-03:00 Phil Archer <phila@w3.org>:

> Thanks Ghislain, I've worked through the doc to fix these, pls see inline
> below.
>
> On 29/04/2016 10:10, Ghislain Atemezing wrote:
>
>> Dear editors,
>>
>> Thanks again for your hard work.
>>
>> Le 28 avr. 2016 à 22:51, Caroline Burle <cburle@nic.br> a écrit :
>>>
>>> thank you again for your very important contributions to the DWBP
>>> document[1].
>>>
>>
>> I’ve just spotted some few typos now that I was re-reading the draft
>> (version 9 April, 2016). They are more like minor typos and suggestions.
>> Sorry if this come late. Please see below:
>>
>>
>> 1- Introduction:
>>   - s/domains &applications/domains & applications
>>
> Fixed
>
>   - Add "open" in "other formats such as CSV"
>>
>
> Added
>
>
>> 4- Context
>>   - Remove "data" in "it is important to adopt data vocabularies" ?
>>
>
> Removed
>
>
>> 5- Namespaces
>>   - cnt' IRI is not <http://www.w3.org/2011/content#> <
>> http://www.w3.org/2011/content#> ?
>>
>
> Surprisingly, it is. It is versioned, previous versions have different
> years in their URIs.
>
>
>> 8.1:
>> - Highlight the example? maybe in italic?
>>
>
> I've applied the Example CSS (and suppressed the counter).
>
> @Editors, I also changed the title to *Running* example. Hope that's OK.
> It's more in line with what we mean.
>
> - Add the ref of Turtle serialization in "RDF examples of the application
>> of some BP are shown using Turtle"
>>
>
> Done
>
>
>> Example 2:
>>   [General suggestion: Would it be good to *always* put the lang tag when
>> using dct:title, skos:prefLabel and dct:description ?!]
>>
>
> Hmm, I'm happy either way. Open to persuasion. But I haven't implemented
> this change.
>
> - Machine-readable:
>>    * That's for native English speaker. I see some spaces before
>> ponctuation: e.g., "mobility ." themes ."
>>
>
> Fixed, thanks.
>
>
>
>> BP3:
>> - s/locale/local in "provide locale" or "providing locale parameters" or
>> "locale information" ?
>>
>
> Nope, locale is correct. A locale is a place (a noun), local is an
> adjective. So we're saying here it's important to say where the data came
> from.
>
>
>> 8.5:
>>   - Missing link to reference [VOCAB-DQV] in the description of the "Data
>> Quality" section?
>>
>
> Fixed.
>
>
>> 8.6:
>>   - s/"it should to be added"/"it should be added"
>>
>
> Fixed.
>
>
>> 8.7:
>>   - Consistent use of "MyCity", not "My City" nor "my city" in BP12
>>
>
> Fixed.
>
>
>> 8.13:
>>   - Missing link to [VOCAB-DUV] in BP29.
>>
>
> Fixed.
>
> Thanks Ghislain - there were some very tricky catches in there. Much
> appreciated.
>
> @Editors - pull request issued.
>
> Phil
>
>
>
>
>>
>>
>> HTH.
>> Cheers,
>>
>> Ghislain
>>
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