DUV Comments

 

Hi, Eric, Bernadette and Sumit, 

First of all, congratulations for the document! 

1. Here are the list of things that I saw in the diagram and not in the
specification: 

cito:hasCitingEntity
duv:hasCitationCreator
oa:hasTarget
duv:hasUserFeedback
duv:hasRating
duv:hasUsageType
duv:hasUsage
duv:perfomedBy
duv:performs
duv:hasUsageTool
duv:hasRole 

 2. Here are the list of the things that I saw in the specification and
not in the diagram (not sure if all of them really should appear in the
diagram): 

duv:hasProducer
duv:hasDistributor
duv:edition
duv:hasAccessInformation
duv:developedBy 

3. I guess that some names that were changed were not updated in the
document text: 

duv:Feedback --> duv:UserFeedback
duv:author --> duv:hasAuthor 

4. I think (only my opinion) that a reader could be confused reading the
examples before the vocabulary overview. Maybe the order of the two
sections could be changed. 

5. I miss an "informal text serialization" explaining the diagram. 

Thanks a lot. 

Cheers, Laufer 

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