Re: Native speaker edits to BP doc

Hi Phil,

Thank you very much for improving the document! You did a great job and the
new version is really good!

In the current version, we have just few BP and they are not completely
described. Besides, some sections are still empty (without description and
without BP).

We'd like to have your opinion about what else we need to do to have the
FPWD. What should be our priorities now?

Thanks again!
Bernadette, Caroline and Newton


2014-12-10 15:32 GMT-03:00 Phil Archer <phila@w3.org>:

> Dear editors,
>
> I've taken a first pass through the informative sections of the BP doc in
> an attempt to make the text a little more free-flowing. Please don't take
> this as a criticism - it's just that I'm a native speaker with a background
> in writing for a living :-)
>
> You can see what my version of the doc looks like now at
> http://philarcher1.github.io/dwbp-1/bp.html
>
> I've created a Pull request so please accept/reject it as you see fit.
>
> Tomorrow I want to look at the BPs themselves.
>
> HTH
>
> Phil
>
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> Phil Archer
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>
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Bernadette Farias Lóscio
Centro de Informática
Universidade Federal de Pernambuco - UFPE, Brazil
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