Native speaker edits to BP doc

Dear editors,

I've taken a first pass through the informative sections of the BP doc 
in an attempt to make the text a little more free-flowing. Please don't 
take this as a criticism - it's just that I'm a native speaker with a 
background in writing for a living :-)

You can see what my version of the doc looks like now at
http://philarcher1.github.io/dwbp-1/bp.html

I've created a Pull request so please accept/reject it as you see fit.

Tomorrow I want to look at the BPs themselves.

HTH

Phil

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Phil Archer
W3C Data Activity Lead
http://www.w3.org/2013/data/

http://philarcher.org
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Received on Wednesday, 10 December 2014 18:32:10 UTC