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Re: DQV Vocab comments

From: Riccardo Albertoni <albertoni@ge.imati.cnr.it>
Date: Wed, 15 Jun 2016 15:08:55 +0200
Message-ID: <CAOHhXmSh8TSKbefVFHKo+O0hKnYPpa6P8QX2GbB9jyuxSreDew@mail.gmail.com>
To: Amrapali Jyotindra Zaveri <amrapali@stanford.edu>, public-dwbp-comments <public-dwbp-comments@w3.org>
Hi Amrapali,
Thanks for your suggestions,
see my comments below.

Il giorno mar 14 giu 2016 alle ore 04:42 Amrapali Jyotindra Zaveri <
amrapali@stanford.edu> ha scritto:

> Hi all,
>
> I looked at the DQV Vocabulary and have a few comments/suggestions:
>
> There is a typo in my name in the references: “Amrapalia” should be
> “Amrapali”.
>
>
Fixed, sorry if I keep  mistaking your name.


> In Section 5.10,
> - In the second example, is it “novel preferred” or “novel, preferred”?
>

it is without comma....


> - This sentence "The quality assessment of the "label importing" can
> depend on two extra parameters: onProperty andonLanguage, respectively
> the SKOS property and the language tag considered for measuring the
> completeness gains.” sounds strange.
>

I have changed this sentence  as in the following:

The quality assessment of the "label importing" depends on two extra
parameters:  onProperty and onLanguage, which are
                        respectively, the SKOS property and the language
tag considered for measuring the completeness gains.

Does this sound  less strange?



> In Section 5.11
> - "GeoDCAT-AP enables to express” rephrase to "GeoDCAT-AP allows to
> express”.
>
> Thanks, done!

In Section 5.1.3
> - In Example 4, there is an extra space between “to” and “methodology”.
>
Thanks, done!


> In Section 6.3
> - I would use “Linked Data” both in the title and first sentence.
>

I have capitalized  "linked data" everywhere, and used Linked Data in
both title
and first sentence.

Cheers,
Riccardo

>
> Thanks.
> Regards,
> Amrapali Zaveri, PhD
> Dumontier Lab, Stanford University
> Twitter: @amrapaliz
>
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