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Re: ACTION-98: Provide draft text for requirements document summarizing 4 privacy aspects...

From: Frederick Hirsch <frederick.hirsch@nokia.com>
Date: Wed, 10 Mar 2010 09:24:27 -0500
Cc: Frederick Hirsch <frederick.hirsch@nokia.com>, Alissa Cooper <acooper@cdt.org>, W3C Device APIs and Policy WG <public-device-apis@w3.org>
Message-Id: <6F0761CD-A0D6-419E-B05B-2DD0AFB74478@nokia.com>
To: ext Dominique Hazael-Massieux <dom@w3.org>
Thanks Alissa for the revision and Dom for the document update (though  
I sometimes wonder if we should first agree changes before  
incorporating):

Editorial comment:

For readability, I suggest we change T* to a string wherever it s  
referenced:

T1 to "UA-Functionality"
T2 to "APP-Policy"
T3 to  "User-Policy"
T4 to "Data-Use"

I for one, cannot remember what "T4" is supposed to mean when reading.

Thus
"T2:  " is changed to "UA-Functionality:" ...

This makes for a more meaningful read with little bloat.  I suggest we  
can use <code> markup for these terms...


Similarly suggest changing

PI1 to "Device-Independent-Policy
Pl2 to "Portable-User-Settings"
Pl3 to "Policy Provisioning"

although currently the Pl* items are not referenced.

regards, Frederick

Frederick Hirsch
Nokia



On Mar 10, 2010, at 5:54 AM, ext Dominique Hazael-Massieux wrote:

> Le mardi 09 mars 2010 à 18:11 +0000, Alissa Cooper a écrit :
>> Per the above action, please find below the suggested text for the
>> privacy considerations section of the policy requirements. I more or
>> less rolled together what was already in the spec with my email from
>> last week, http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-device-apis/2010Mar/0027.html
>> , with minor clarifying edits. Although I left the mark-up in so it
>> can more easily be inserted into the doc, I think it's pretty  
>> readable.
>
> Thanks Alissa, I've incorporated your text in the document itself  
> where
> it will be even more readable:
> http://dev.w3.org/2009/dap/policy-reqs/#privacy-considerations
>
> Dom
>
>
>
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