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dap commit: Spelling and cosmetic changes.

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Date: Mon, 05 Nov 2012 16:39:59 +0000
Message-Id: <E1TVPiR-0006pL-Hl@mcbain.w3.org>
To: public-dap-commits@w3.org
changeset:   269:20ab51fe20f3
tag:         tip
user:        Mounir Lamouri <mounir.lamouri@gmail.com>
date:        Mon Nov 05 16:39:27 2012 +0000
files:       network-api/Overview.html
description:
Spelling and cosmetic changes.


diff -r 999605452b3b -r 20ab51fe20f3 network-api/Overview.html
--- a/network-api/Overview.html	Fri Nov 02 13:32:16 2012 +0100
+++ b/network-api/Overview.html	Mon Nov 05 16:39:27 2012 +0000
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 <html>
   <head>
     <title>The Network Information API</title>
-    <meta http-equiv='Content-Type' content='text/html;charset=utf-8' />
+    <meta http-equiv='Content-Type' content='text/html;charset=utf-8'>
     <script src='http://www.w3.org/Tools/respec/respec-w3c-common' class='remove'></script>
     <script class='remove'>
       var respecConfig = {
@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@
 
           // if this is a LCWD, uncomment and set the end of its review period
           // lcEnd: "2009-08-05",
-          extraCSS:             ["../ReSpec.js/css/respec.css"],
+          extraCSS:   ["../ReSpec.js/css/respec.css"],
           noIDLIn:    true,
 
           editors:  [
@@ -24,6 +24,7 @@
                 company: "Mozilla",
                 companyURL: "http://mozilla.org/" },
           ],
+
           wg:           "Device APIs and Policy Working Group",
           wgURI:        "http://www.w3.org/2009/dap/",
           wgPublicList: "public-device-apis",
@@ -61,17 +62,17 @@
         &lt;!DOCTYPE&gt;
         &lt;html&gt;
           &lt;head&gt;
-            &lt;title&gt;Poney viewer&lt;/title&gt;
+            &lt;title&gt;Pony viewer&lt;/title&gt;
           &lt;/head&gt;
           &lt;body&gt;
-            &lt;img id='poney' alt="An image showing a poney" title="My precious!"&gt;
+            &lt;img id='pony' alt="An image showing a pony" title="My precious!"&gt;
             &lt;script&gt;
-              var i = document.getElementById('poney');
+              var i = document.getElementById('pony');
 
               if (navigator.connection.bandwidth > 2) {
-                i.src = "http://example.com/poney_hd.png";
+                i.src = "http://example.com/pony_hd.png";
               } else {
-                i.src = "http://example.com/poney_ld.png";
+                i.src = "http://example.com/pony_ld.png";
               }
             &lt;/script&gt;
           &lt;/body&gt;
@@ -131,7 +132,7 @@
         of the hosting device. The information disclosed has minimal
         impact on privacy or fingerprinting, and therefore is exposed without
         permission grants. For example, authors cannot directly know what kind of connection
-        is actually in use by the hosting device.
+        is currently in use by the hosting device.
       </p>
     </section>
 
@@ -186,7 +187,7 @@
             If the implementation is not able to know the status of the connection or if the user is offline, the value MUST be set to false.
           </p>
           <div class="note">
-            If unnable to know if a connection is metered, a <a>user agent</a> could ask the user about the status of his current connection.
+            If unable to know if a connection is metered, a <a>user agent</a> could ask the user about the status of his current connection.
             For example, a preference could let the user define if the mobile connection used on the device is metered.
           </div>
         </dd>
@@ -294,10 +295,10 @@
     </section>
 
     <section class='appendix'>
-      <h2>Acknowledgements</h2>
+      <h2>Acknowledgments</h2>
       <p>
         Special thanks to Robin Berjon for his help.
       </p>
     </section>
   </body>
-</html>
+</html>
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