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2009/dap/system-info battery-status.html,1.28,1.29

From: Anssi Kostiainen via cvs-syncmail <cvsmail@w3.org>
Date: Wed, 29 Jun 2011 05:21:10 +0000
To: public-dap-commits@w3.org
Message-Id: <E1QbnD4-0000uN-Hz@lionel-hutz.w3.org>
Update of /sources/public/2009/dap/system-info
In directory hutz:/tmp/cvs-serv3469

Modified Files:
	battery-status.html 
Log Message:
Josh's editorial feedback

Index: battery-status.html
===================================================================
RCS file: /sources/public/2009/dap/system-info/battery-status.html,v
retrieving revision 1.28
retrieving revision 1.29
diff -u -d -r1.28 -r1.29
--- battery-status.html	28 Jun 2011 05:09:14 -0000	1.28
+++ battery-status.html	29 Jun 2011 05:21:08 -0000	1.29
@@ -194,7 +194,7 @@
         <code>Window</code> and <code>WorkerGlobalScope</code> objects.
       </p>
       <p>
-        The <code>body</code> element exposes as event handler content
+        The <code>body</code> element exposes as an event handler content
         attribute the <code>onbatterystatus</code> event handler of the
         <code>Window</code> object. It also mirrors its event handler IDL
         attribute.
@@ -262,17 +262,17 @@
         same names.
       </p>
       <p>
-        When a change in the battery status of the hosting device occurs as
-        follows, the <a class="product-ua" href="#ua">user agent</a> MUST
-        dispatch a <a>BatteryStatusEvent</a> event on the <code>Window</code>
-        [[!HTML5]] and <code>WorkerGlobalScope</code> [[!WEBWORKERS]] objects:
+        The <a class="product-ua" href="#ua">user agent</a> MUST dispatch a
+        <a>BatteryStatusEvent</a> event on the <code>Window</code> [[!HTML5]]
+        and <code>WorkerGlobalScope</code> [[!WEBWORKERS]] objects when a
+        change in the battery status of the hosting device occurs as follows:
       </p>
       <ul>
         <li>
           <code>isPlugged</code> changes its value, or
         </li>
         <li>
-          <code>level</code> varies by a 1% or more
+          <code>level</code> changes by at least 1%
         </li>
       </ul>
       <p>
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