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From: Max Froumentin via cvs-syncmail <cvsmail@w3.org>
Date: Fri, 18 Dec 2009 15:52:47 +0000
To: public-dap-commits@w3.org
Message-Id: <E1NLf8J-0001nC-KN@lionel-hutz.w3.org>
Update of /sources/public/2009/dap/system-info
In directory hutz:/tmp/cvs-serv6874

Modified Files:
	Overview.html 
Log Message:
after comments from Claes:
- make recipients privacy section non-normative
- ambient temperature is in degrees


Index: Overview.html
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RCS file: /sources/public/2009/dap/system-info/Overview.html,v
retrieving revision 1.45
retrieving revision 1.46
diff -u -d -r1.45 -r1.46
--- Overview.html	18 Dec 2009 12:21:29 -0000	1.45
+++ Overview.html	18 Dec 2009 15:52:45 -0000	1.46
@@ -101,31 +101,31 @@
         mechanism with which to authorize access to system
         information.</p>
       </section>
-      <section>
+      <section class="informative">
         <h2>Privacy considerations for recipients of system information</h2>
         
-        <p>Recipients MUST only request system information when
-        necessary. Recipients MUST only use the system information
+        <p>Recipients should only request system information when
+        necessary. Recipients should only use the system information
         for the task for which it was provided to them. Recipients
-        MUST dispose of system information once that task is
+        should dispose of system information once that task is
         completed, unless expressly permitted to retain it by the
-        user. Recipients MUST also take measures to protect this
+        user. Recipients should also take measures to protect this
         information against unauthorized access. If system
         information is stored, users SHOULD be allowed to update and
         delete this information.</p>
         
-        <p>The recipient of system information MUST NOT retransmit
+        <p>The recipient of system information should not retransmit
         the system information without the user’s express
         permission. Care should be taken when retransmitting and use
         of encryption is encouraged.</p>
         
-        <p>Recipients MUST clearly and conspicuously disclose the
+        <p>Recipients should clearly and conspicuously disclose the
         fact that they are collecting system data, the purpose for
         the collection, how long the data is retained, how the data
         is secured, how the data is shared if it is shared, how
         users can access, update and delete the data, and any other
         choices that users have with respect to the data. This
-        disclosure MUST include an explanation of any exceptions to
+        disclosure should include an explanation of any exceptions to
         the guidelines listed above.</p>
       </section>
       <section class="informative">
@@ -944,10 +944,7 @@
 
             <dl title="[NoInterfaceObject] interface AmbientTemperature" class="idl">
               <dt>readonly attribute float value</dt>
-              <dd>The overall ambient temperature level around the
-              device. The value is normalised from the minimum and maximum
-              temperature level that this device can report to 0 and
-              1.</dd>
+              <dd>This thermometer's current temperature, in degrees Celcius (°C)</dd>
               <dt>readonly attribute Thermometer thermometers[]</dt>
               <dd>The list of all external thermometers connected to this device</dd>
             </dl>
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