- From: Barclay, Daniel <daniel@fgm.com>
- Date: Wed, 5 Aug 2009 12:09:53 -0400
- To: <public-cwm-talk@w3.org>
- Message-ID: <4A79AED1.2090700@fgm.com>
For any future editions of the N3 specification currently at
http://www.w3.org/TeamSubmission/n3/
(http://www.w3.org/TeamSubmission/2008/SUBM-n3-20080114/), there are
a number of editorial errors.  Here are some from the Introduction
and Grammar sections:
In the Introduction section:
* It says:
     This language has ben developed ...
* It says:
     This is a language which is a compact and readable alternative ...
   (That "which" should be "that.")
* It says:
     The developer learning N3 is invited to try the A tutorial ...
* It says
     ... URI abbreviation using prefixes which are bound to a
     namespace (using @prefix) a bit like in XML...
   (A comma seems to be missing before "a bit" (that the "which"
   should be "that" or should have a comma before it).)
In the Grammar section:
* It says:
     The grammar of N3 is defined by a context free grammar:
       * Context-free grammar in N3
    (The (first) reference to "context free grammar" should have
    the hyphen too.)
* It says:
     N3 files are encoded in UTF-8 (See RFC2279), in normalized in
     Normalization Form C.
   (Note the second occurrence of "in.")
* It says:
     A full 32 unicode implementation would normally be preferable.
Also, the formatting of the non-normative text with both a
reduced-contrast color _and_ a reduced-contrast background color
makes it harder to read.  Please consider ????
Additionally, the text of the third paragraph of the "Status ..." section
is in a fairly pale gray.
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