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From: Daniel Weck via cvs-syncmail <cvsmail@w3.org>
Date: Mon, 13 Feb 2012 13:57:56 +0000
To: public-css-commits@w3.org
Message-Id: <E1RwwPk-0006QT-Of@lionel-hutz.w3.org>
Update of /sources/public/csswg/css3-speech
In directory hutz:/tmp/cvs-serv24685

Modified Files:
	Overview.html Overview.src.html 
Log Message:
minor prose fixes.


Index: Overview.html
===================================================================
RCS file: /sources/public/csswg/css3-speech/Overview.html,v
retrieving revision 1.94
retrieving revision 1.95
diff -u -d -r1.94 -r1.95
--- Overview.html	13 Feb 2012 11:53:42 -0000	1.94
+++ Overview.html	13 Feb 2012 13:57:54 -0000	1.95
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 
 <html lang=en>
  <head>
-  <title>CSS Speech Module</title>
+  <title>CSS Speech Module, Level 3</title>
   <meta content="text/html; charset=utf-8" http-equiv=Content-Type>
   <link href="../default.css" rel=stylesheet type="text/css">
 
@@ -157,12 +157,14 @@
    of markup documents (e.g. HTML, XML) on various supports, such as screen,
    paper, speech, etc. The Speech module defines aural CSS properties that
    enable authors to declaratively control the rendering of documents via
-   speech synthesis, and using optional audio cues. The feature set exposed
-   by this specification is designed to match the model described by the
-   Speech Synthesis Markup Language (SSML) Version 1.1 <a href="#SSML"
-   rel=biblioentry>[SSML]<!--{{!SSML}}--></a>. Note that this standard was
-   developed in cooperation with the <a href="http://www.w3.org/Voice/">Voice
-   Browser Activity</a>.
+   speech synthesis, and using optional audio cues. Some of the features in
+   this specification are conceptually close to functionality described in
+   the Speech Synthesis Markup Language (SSML) Version 1.1 <a href="#SSML"
+   rel=biblioentry>[SSML]<!--{{!SSML}}--></a>. However, the specificities of
+   the CSS model mean that compatibility with SSML in terms of syntax and/or
+   semantics is partially enabled. Note that this standard was developed in
+   cooperation with the <a href="http://www.w3.org/Voice/">Voice Browser
+   Activity</a>.
 
   <h2 class="no-num no-toc" id=status>Status of this document</h2>
   <!--begin-status-->
@@ -199,10 +201,13 @@
    W3C Patent Policy</a>.</p>
   <!--end-status-->
 
-  <p>This is a “last call” working draft, i.e., the working group expects
-   this to be the last call for comments before the document becomes a W3C
-   Candidate Recommendation. The <strong>deadline for comments</strong> is
-   <strong>30 September 2011</strong>.</p>
+  <p><span class=issue>TODO: this statement is now obsolete, as this document
+   is being updated to include the resolutions from the disposition of
+   comments of the Last Call Working Draft.</span>This is a “last call”
+   working draft, i.e., the working group expects this to be the last call
+   for comments before the document becomes a W3C Candidate Recommendation.
+   The <strong>deadline for comments</strong> is <strong>30 September
+   2011</strong>.</p>
   <!-- div class="issue">
       <p>The following issues need to be discussed and require working group resolutions:</p>
       <ul>
@@ -227,7 +232,8 @@
 
   <p>The CSS Speech module is a community effort and if you would like to
    help with implementation and driving the specification forward along the
-   W3C Recommendation track, please contact the editors.
+   W3C Recommendation track, please contact <a href="#editors-list">the
+   editors</a>.
 
   <h2 class="no-num no-toc" id=contents>Table of contents</h2>
   <!--begin-toc-->
@@ -377,7 +383,7 @@
 
   <h2 id=introduction><span class=secno>1. </span>Introduction</h2>
 
-  <p class=note>Note that this entire section is non-normative.
+  <p class=note>Note that this entire section is informative.
 
   <h3 id=design-goals><span class=secno>1.1. </span>Design goals, motivations</h3>
 
@@ -2881,7 +2887,7 @@
 
   <h2 id=content><span class=secno>13. </span>Inserted and replaced content</h2>
 
-  <p class=note>Note that this entire section is non-normative.
+  <p class=note>Note that this entire section is informative.
 
   <p>Sometimes, authors will want to specify a mapping from the source text
    into another string prior to the application of the regular pronunciation
@@ -2951,7 +2957,7 @@
 
   <h2 id=pronunciation><span class=secno>14. </span> Pronunciation, phonemes</h2>
 
-  <p class=note>Note that this entire section is non-normative.
+  <p class=note>Note that this entire section is informative.
 
   <p> CSS does not specify how to define the pronunciation (expressed using a
    well-defined phonetic alphabet) of a particular piece of text within the

Index: Overview.src.html
===================================================================
RCS file: /sources/public/csswg/css3-speech/Overview.src.html,v
retrieving revision 1.96
retrieving revision 1.97
diff -u -d -r1.96 -r1.97
--- Overview.src.html	13 Feb 2012 11:53:42 -0000	1.96
+++ Overview.src.html	13 Feb 2012 13:57:54 -0000	1.97
@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 <!-- !DOCTYPE html PUBLIC "-//W3C//DTD HTML 4.01//EN" "http://www.w3.org/TR/html4/strict.dtd" -->
 <html lang="en">
   <head>
-    <title>CSS Speech Module</title>
+    <title>CSS Speech Module, Level 3</title>
     <meta content="text/html; charset=utf-8" http-equiv="Content-Type" />
     <link href="../default.css" rel="stylesheet" type="text/css" />
     <style type="text/css">
@@ -118,15 +118,19 @@
     <p>CSS (Cascading Style Sheets) is a language that describes the rendering of markup documents
       (e.g. HTML, XML) on various supports, such as screen, paper, speech, etc. The Speech module
       defines aural CSS properties that enable authors to declaratively control the rendering of
-      documents via speech synthesis, and using optional audio cues. The feature set exposed by this
-      specification is designed to match the model described by the Speech Synthesis Markup Language
-      (SSML) Version 1.1 [[!SSML]]. Note that this standard was developed in cooperation with the <a
-        href="http://www.w3.org/Voice/">Voice Browser Activity</a>.</p>
+      documents via speech synthesis, and using optional audio cues. Some of the features in this
+      specification are conceptually close to functionality described in the Speech Synthesis Markup
+      Language (SSML) Version 1.1 [[!SSML]]. However, the specificities of the CSS model mean that
+      compatibility with SSML in terms of syntax and/or semantics is partially enabled. Note that
+      this standard was developed in cooperation with the <a href="http://www.w3.org/Voice/">Voice
+        Browser Activity</a>.</p>
     <h2 class="no-num no-toc" id="status">Status of this document</h2>
     <!--status-->
-    <p>This is a “last call” working draft, i.e., the working group expects this to be the last call
-      for comments before the document becomes a W3C Candidate Recommendation. The <strong>deadline
-        for comments</strong> is <strong>30 September 2011</strong>.</p>
+    <p><span class="issue">TODO: this statement is now obsolete, as this document is being updated
+        to include the resolutions from the disposition of comments of the Last Call Working
+        Draft.</span>This is a “last call” working draft, i.e., the working group expects this to be
+      the last call for comments before the document becomes a W3C Candidate Recommendation. The
+        <strong>deadline for comments</strong> is <strong>30 September 2011</strong>.</p>
     <!-- div class="issue">
       <p>The following issues need to be discussed and require working group resolutions:</p>
       <ul>
@@ -141,12 +145,12 @@
       has not been enough interest from implementers: 'voice-balance', 'voice-duration',
       'voice-pitch', 'voice-range', and 'voice-stress'. </p>
     <p>The CSS Speech module is a community effort and if you would like to help with implementation
-      and driving the specification forward along the W3C Recommendation track, please contact the
-      editors.</p>
+      and driving the specification forward along the W3C Recommendation track, please contact <a
+        href="#editors-list">the editors</a>.</p>
     <h2 class="no-num no-toc" id="contents">Table of contents</h2>
     <!--toc-->
     <h2 id="introduction">Introduction</h2>
-    <p class="note">Note that this entire section is non-normative.</p>
+    <p class="note">Note that this entire section is informative.</p>
     <h3 id="design-goals">Design goals, motivations</h3>
     <p>The aural rendering of a document combines speech synthesis (also known as "TTS", the acronym
       for "Text to Speech") and auditory icons (which we refer to as "audio cues" in this
@@ -2325,7 +2329,7 @@
       speech output don't generate redundancies or create inconsistencies (for example: duplicated
       or different list item numbering scheme). </p>
     <h2 id="content">Inserted and replaced content</h2>
-    <p class="note">Note that this entire section is non-normative.</p>
+    <p class="note">Note that this entire section is informative.</p>
     <p>Sometimes, authors will want to specify a mapping from the source text into another string
       prior to the application of the regular pronunciation rules. This may be used for uncommon
       abbreviations or acronyms which are unlikely to be recognized by the synthesizer. The
@@ -2374,7 +2378,7 @@
     <p>Detailed information can be found in the CSS3 Generated and Replaced Content module
       [[CSS3GENCON]].</p>
     <h2 id="pronunciation"> Pronunciation, phonemes </h2>
-    <p class="note">Note that this entire section is non-normative.</p>
+    <p class="note">Note that this entire section is informative.</p>
     <p> CSS does not specify how to define the pronunciation (expressed using a well-defined
       phonetic alphabet) of a particular piece of text within the markup document. A "phonemes"
       property was described in earlier drafts of this specification, but objections were raised due
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