csswg/css-module Overview.html,1.2,1.3 Overview.src.html,1.2,1.3

Update of /sources/public/csswg/css-module
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Modified Files:
	Overview.html Overview.src.html 
Log Message:
editorial tweaks to module template due to feedback

Index: Overview.html
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RCS file: /sources/public/csswg/css-module/Overview.html,v
retrieving revision 1.2
retrieving revision 1.3
diff -u -d -r1.2 -r1.3
--- Overview.html	2 Jan 2011 20:19:12 -0000	1.2
+++ Overview.html	23 Feb 2011 05:16:47 -0000	1.3
@@ -16,13 +16,14 @@
    <h1>CSS <var class=issue>TEMPLATE</var> Module Level <var
     class=issue>N</var></h1>
 
-   <h2 class="no-num no-toc" id=longstatus-date>Editor's Draft 2 January 2011</h2>
+   <h2 class="no-num no-toc" id=longstatus-date>Editor's Draft 23 February
+    2011</h2>
 
    <dl>
     <dt>This version:
 
-    <dd><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2011/ED-css3-TEMPLATE-20110102">
-     http://www.w3.org/TR/2011/ED-css3-TEMPLATE-20110102</a>
+    <dd><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2011/ED-css3-TEMPLATE-20110223">
+     http://www.w3.org/TR/2011/ED-css3-TEMPLATE-20110223</a>
 
     <dt>Latest version:
 
@@ -385,7 +386,7 @@
    Classes</h3>
 
   <p>Conformance to <var class=issue>CSS TEMPLATE Module</var> is defined for
-   three classes:
+   three conformance classes:
 
   <dl>
    <dt><dfn id=style-sheet title="style sheet!!as conformance class">style
@@ -416,7 +417,7 @@
    if, in addition to interpreting the style sheet as defined by the
    appropriate specifications, it supports all the properties defined by <var
    class=issue>CSS TEMPLATE Module</var> by parsing them correctly and
-   rendering the document accordingly. However the inability of a UA to
+   rendering the document accordingly. However, the inability of a UA to
    correctly render a document due to limitations of the device does not make
    the UA non-conformant. (For example, a UA is not required to render color
    on a monochrome monitor.)
@@ -523,10 +524,10 @@
    <dt id=CSS21>[CSS21]
 
    <dd>Bert Bos; et al. <a
-    href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2009/CR-CSS2-20090908"><cite>Cascading Style
-    Sheets Level 2 Revision 1 (CSS 2.1) Specification.</cite></a> 8 September
-    2009. W3C Candidate Recommendation. (Work in progress.) URL: <a
-    href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2009/CR-CSS2-20090908">http://www.w3.org/TR/2009/CR-CSS2-20090908</a>
+    href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2010/WD-CSS2-20101207"><cite>Cascading Style
+    Sheets Level 2 Revision 1 (CSS 2.1) Specification.</cite></a> 7 December
+    2010. W3C Working Draft. (Work in progress.) URL: <a
+    href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2010/WD-CSS2-20101207">http://www.w3.org/TR/2010/WD-CSS2-20101207</a>
     </dd>
    <!---->
 
@@ -572,10 +573,10 @@
    <dt id=CSS21>[CSS21]
 
    <dd>Bert Bos; et al. <a
-    href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2009/CR-CSS2-20090908"><cite>Cascading Style
-    Sheets Level 2 Revision 1 (CSS 2.1) Specification.</cite></a> 8 September
-    2009. W3C Candidate Recommendation. (Work in progress.) URL: <a
-    href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2009/CR-CSS2-20090908">http://www.w3.org/TR/2009/CR-CSS2-20090908</a>
+    href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2010/WD-CSS2-20101207"><cite>Cascading Style
+    Sheets Level 2 Revision 1 (CSS 2.1) Specification.</cite></a> 7 December
+    2010. W3C Working Draft. (Work in progress.) URL: <a
+    href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2010/WD-CSS2-20101207">http://www.w3.org/TR/2010/WD-CSS2-20101207</a>
     </dd>
    <!---->
 

Index: Overview.src.html
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RCS file: /sources/public/csswg/css-module/Overview.src.html,v
retrieving revision 1.2
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diff -u -d -r1.2 -r1.3
--- Overview.src.html	2 Jan 2011 20:19:12 -0000	1.2
+++ Overview.src.html	23 Feb 2011 05:16:47 -0000	1.3
@@ -239,7 +239,7 @@
 <h3 id="conformance-classes">Conformance Classes</h3>
 
   <p>Conformance to <var class="issue">CSS TEMPLATE Module</var>
-  is defined for three classes:
+  is defined for three conformance classes:
   <dl>
     <dt><dfn title="style sheet!!as conformance class">style sheet</dfn>
       <dd>A <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/CSS21/conform.html#style-sheet">CSS
@@ -262,7 +262,7 @@
   if, in addition to interpreting the style sheet as defined by the
   appropriate specifications, it supports all the properties defined
   by <var class="issue">CSS TEMPLATE Module</var> by parsing them correctly
-  and rendering the document accordingly. However the inability of a
+  and rendering the document accordingly. However, the inability of a
   UA to correctly render a document due to limitations of the device
   does not make the UA non-conformant. (For example, a UA is not
   required to render color on a monochrome monitor.)

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