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Re: Comments on draft charter [Was: Agenda: Verifiable Claims Teleconference - Tuesday, March 8th 2016]

From: Manu Sporny <msporny@digitalbazaar.com>
Date: Sat, 12 Mar 2016 12:36:58 -0500
Message-ID: <56E453BA.3060607@digitalbazaar.com>
To: Web Payments IG <public-webpayments-ig@w3.org>, Credentials Community Group <public-credentials@w3.org>
On 03/11/2016 10:17 AM, Eric Korb wrote:
> Here are my suggestions:
> 
> I suggest that using "reducing" doesn't always imply the right 
> connotation.  Perhaps we can turn these goals around to say something
> like:
> 
> "Improve detection of fraud,..."

Done.

https://github.com/w3c/webpayments-ig/commit/e374db989290fded6e7d7fa51edc1fd21298a288#diff-b366572a8c93e0ca1d571849e3ae6a3dR149

> "Improve operational efficiency..."

Done (I had previously rejected the change, but found more positive
wording that worked this time... I think).

https://github.com/w3c/webpayments-ig/commit/82ea24cb58feec3ffd4d9d361d1bc2dd37649ef6#diff-b366572a8c93e0ca1d571849e3ae6a3dR153

> Generally, I think we need to state that our goal is to provide an 
> implied benefit to all stakeholders: issuers, holders and consumers.
>  I think the tone we have is bit 1-sided - benefits to consumer only.
>  For example: Issuers want to protect their reputation, holders want
>  to ensure their credentials are protected, and the consumers what to
>  be confident in their decisions.

Done. I updated the security/privacy section to lead with your sentence
above. I also reworded a good chunk of it to align w/ the wording change:

https://github.com/w3c/webpayments-ig/commit/523d463645ed7ef1c906115dbfa3d6dfb6b03f0e#diff-b366572a8c93e0ca1d571849e3ae6a3dR218

> Lastly, in a previous comment, I suggested that we call out the need
>  for internationalization.  I believe there was support for the idea.
>  Can we add words that address "decentralized and extensible 
> vocabularies with built-in internationalization"?

I have added a section on internationalization and accessibility
(because we need that too) here:

https://github.com/w3c/webpayments-ig/commit/fb21bf23cc85faba24f2e3d7fa967e5a1085e9e6#diff-b366572a8c93e0ca1d571849e3ae6a3dR251

-- manu

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