- From: Manu Sporny <msporny@digitalbazaar.com>
- Date: Thu, 10 Mar 2016 16:57:54 -0500
- To: Ian Jacobs <ij@w3.org>
- CC: Web Payments IG <public-webpayments-ig@w3.org>, Credentials Community Group <public-credentials@w3.org>
On 03/07/2016 11:17 PM, Ian Jacobs wrote: > Here are some comments on the draft charter [1]. [1] > http://w3c.github.io/vctf/charter/proposal.html Thanks for the input, Ian. I'm just getting around to processing your feedback now. I've migrated the VCTF draft charter to its new home in the WPIG here: http://w3c.github.io/webpayments-ig/VCTF/charter/vcwg-draft.html > * The section titled “Goals” does not really express any goals. I > think it’s important to state them clearly. Done. https://github.com/w3c/webpayments-ig/commit/6ca64ce59d337833013545243920cd46399eb0e8 There are now a real set of goals listed: http://w3c.github.io/webpayments-ig/VCTF/charter/vcwg-draft.html#goals > I also suggest deleting the first paragraph or moving to the ‘About > this charter” section. Fixed. https://github.com/w3c/webpayments-ig/commit/6ca64ce59d337833013545243920cd46399eb0e8 The paragraph has been moved to the 'About this charter' section. > * "The findings suggest that there is consensus to address a > @@@narrow set of use cases@@@“ I believe that is a contentious > statement and suggest that it be replace by: > > “The Web Payments Interest Group recommended that the task force > draft a charter to determine whether there is consensus within the > community (including those interviewed) for the scope of work. Done. https://github.com/w3c/webpayments-ig/commit/6ca64ce59d337833013545243920cd46399eb0e8 > * I think you can delete "Development of this charter was supported > in part by the European Union's 7th Research Framework Programme > (FP7/ 2013-2015) under grant agreement nº611327 - HTML5 Apps.” Done. https://github.com/w3c/webpayments-ig/commit/6ca64ce59d337833013545243920cd46399eb0e8 -- manu -- Manu Sporny (skype: msporny, twitter: manusporny, G+: +Manu Sporny) Founder/CEO - Digital Bazaar, Inc. blog: Web Payments: The Architect, the Sage, and the Moral Voice https://manu.sporny.org/2015/payments-collaboration/
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