Re: Suggestion for grammatical improvement ( LC-2809)

Perfect!

Kind regards
Harry



On 22 September 2013 16:46, <akirkpat@adobe.com> wrote:

>  Dear harry.loots@ieee.org,
>
> The Web Content Accessibility Guidelines Working Group has reviewed the
> comments you sent [1] on the Last Call Working Draft [2] of the Techniques
> for WCAG 2.0 published on 11 Jul 2013. Thank you for having taken the time
> to review the document and to send us comments!
>
> The Working Group's response to your comment is included below.
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>  1. http://www.w3.org/mid/E1V9B7u-00045q-CJ@tibor.w3.org
>  2. http://www.w3.org/WAI/GL/2013/WD-WCAG20-TECHS-20130711/
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> Your comment on G8: Providing a movie with extended audio descriptions:
> > Name: Harry Loots
> > Email: harry.loots@ieee.org
> > Affiliation: EPO
> > Document: TD
> > Item Number: G8
> > Part of Item: Applicability
> > Comment Type: editorial
> > Summary of Issue: Suggestion for grammatical improvement
> > Comment (Including rationale for any proposed change):
> > Sentence described in proposed change contains grammatical error. See
> > below:
> >
> > Proposed Change:
> > Current text:
> > An alternate version of an online video of a family escaping from a
> > burning building, there is a continuous dialogue between the husband and
> > wife about where the children are.
> >
> > Suggested change:
> > delete {An}
> > insert {In an}
> > New text:
> > [begin add]In an[end add] [begin delete]An[end delete] alternate version
> > of an online video of a family escaping from a burning building, there
> > is a continuous dialogue between the husband and wife about where the
> > children are.
> >
> > Alternative to suggested change is to substitute  [,] with [:]
>
>
> Working Group Resolution (LC-2809):
> Thank you for your comment.  Since this is representing an equivalent of
> the video your latter suggestion with the colon makes more sense and we
> will make the change.
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