"must be presented in non-text format"

Name: Makoto Ueki
Email: makoto.ueki@gmail.com
Affiliation: JIS Working Group
Document: W2
Item Number: Success Criterion 1.1.1
Part of Item: 
Comment Type: editorial
Summary of Issue: "must be presented in non-text format"
Comment (Including rationale for any proposed change):
"must be presented in non-text format" which is defined in Glossary can be changed to "would be invalid if presented in text" as defined in Grossary. The phrase is used just one time.

Proposed Change:
Just replace "must be presented in non-text format" with "would be invalid if presented in text" and remove "must be presented in non-text format" from Glossary.

Received on Tuesday, 16 September 2008 18:11:00 UTC