1.4.5 wording can use some improvement

Name: Alex Li
Email: alex.li@sap.com
Affiliation: SAP
Document: W2
Item Number: Success Criterion 1.4.5
Part of Item: 
Comment Type: editorial
Summary of Issue: 1.4.5 wording can use some improvement
Comment (Including rationale for any proposed change):


Proposed Change:
If the rendering technologies being used can achieve the visual designed by the author via text, use text to convey information rather than images of text except for the following exceptions...