Name: Patrick H. Lauke Email: redux@splintered.co.uk Affiliation: Document: W2 Item Number: Appendix A: Glossary Part of Item: Comment Type: editorial Summary of Issue: set of Web pages - unnecessarily convoluted Comment (Including rationale for any proposed change): \"and that are created...organization\" sounds awkward, not always true - thinking of multi-author environments - and addressed if my previous point is considered (limiting the set of Web page to the same site) Proposed Change: remove entire \"and that are created...organization\" sentenceReceived on Saturday, 2 February 2008 02:44:15 GMT
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