general flash and red threshold - confusing jargon?

Name: Patrick H. Lauke
Email: redux@splintered.co.uk
Affiliation: 
Document: W2
Item Number: Appendix A: Glossary
Part of Item: 
Comment Type: editorial
Summary of Issue: general flash and red threshold - confusing jargon?
Comment (Including rationale for any proposed change):
this section introduces a lot of specific jargon and technical wording (\"steradians\") and unqualified measures (\"0.1 degrees\" ... of what?\")

Proposed Change:
clarify measures and avoid jargon

Received on Saturday, 2 February 2008 02:35:01 UTC