Name: Patrick H. Lauke Email: redux@splintered.co.uk Affiliation: Document: W2 Item Number: Appendix A: Glossary Part of Item: Comment Type: editorial Summary of Issue: general flash and red threshold - confusing jargon? Comment (Including rationale for any proposed change): this section introduces a lot of specific jargon and technical wording (\"steradians\") and unqualified measures (\"0.1 degrees\" ... of what?\") Proposed Change: clarify measures and avoid jargonReceived on Saturday, 2 February 2008 02:35:01 GMT
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