conforming alternative version - awkward wording

Name: Patrick H. Lauke
Email: redux@splintered.co.uk
Affiliation: 
Document: W2
Item Number: Appendix A: Glossary
Part of Item: 
Comment Type: editorial
Summary of Issue: conforming alternative version - awkward wording
Comment (Including rationale for any proposed change):
\"4. for which one at least of the following is true:\"



also, isn\'t point c just a special case of b?

Proposed Change:
change to \"4. for which at least one of the following is true:\"

Received on Friday, 1 February 2008 15:47:43 UTC