activity where moving, blinking...

Name: Patrick H. Lauke
Email: redux@splintered.co.uk
Affiliation: 
Document: W2
Item Number: Appendix A: Glossary
Part of Item: 
Comment Type: editorial
Summary of Issue: activity where moving, blinking...
Comment (Including rationale for any proposed change):
the explanation is lengthy, and doesn\'t really say more than the term it tries to clarify. maybe just focus on writing something that explains what\'s meant by \"essential\"

Proposed Change:
just explain \"essential\" as \"which, if removed, would fundamentally change the functionality of the content\"