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Combine \"usable in general\" and \"older individuals\"

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Date: Fri, 1 Feb 2008 00:14:11 +0000 (GMT)
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Name: Patrick H. Lauke
Email: redux@splintered.co.uk
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Document: W2
Item Number: Introduction
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Comment Type: editorial
Summary of Issue: Combine \"usable in general\" and \"older individuals\"
Comment (Including rationale for any proposed change):
The 2nd para sounds a bit stilted and, in the second half, seems to jump from users with disabilities, to users in general, to degrees of disability, and then back to (general)/older users.

Proposed Change:
Reorder sentences and merge the two general ones.



...and neurological disabilities. Although these guidelines cover a wide range...and combinations of disabilities. These guidelines also make content more usable by older individuals with changing abilities due to aging, and often improve usability for all users in general.
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