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WCAG 2.0 Comment Submission

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Date: Fri, 23 Jun 2006 03:45:21 +0000 (GMT)
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Name: Judy Brewer
Email: jbrewer@w3.org
Affiliation: W3C/WAI, on behalf of the Education and Outreach Working Group
Document: W2
Item Number: intro
Part of Item: 
Comment Type: editorial
Comment (Including rationale for any proposed change):
The amount of jargon in the introduction makes it less helpful than possible as introductory material; for instance, \"\"conformance\", \"success criteria\", \"how to meet links\",  \"intent\",

\"sufficient techniques\", \"baseline assumptions.\"



Proposed Change:
Copyedit for increased use of plain English explanations; and/or introduce the jargon later in the introduction. 
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