Name: Shawn Henry Email: shawn@w3.org Affiliation: W3C WAI Document: W2 Item Number: references Part of Item: Comment Type: editorial Comment (Including rationale for any proposed change): Editorial suggestions Proposed Change: note: some similar suggestions for other appendices and so any changes should be synched suggestion: Use “Informative” rather than “Non-Normative” and link “informative” to the glossary definition. Consider deleting one of them – either from the <h1> or from the first sentence. If leave first sentence, change to “Appendix E: References is informative.” suggestion: clean up top matter (\"Quick Table of Contents\" extraneous? \" Appendix E: References\" repetitive with <h1> and links to self) question: should the <title> and the <h1> match, or be more similar? question: WCAG20 reference is circular. not sure why it’s there?Received on Thursday, 22 June 2006 21:07:59 GMT
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