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Re: [CDR] Typos/Grammar

From: Steve K Speicher <sspeiche@us.ibm.com>
Date: Wed, 8 Mar 2006 11:12:31 -0500
To: Jeff Schiller <codedread@gmail.com>
Cc: public-cdf@w3.org
Message-ID: <OFBD2CB928.CB8DE204-ON8525712B.005818A2-8525712B.0058EB3B@us.ibm.com>

Hi Jeff,

It appears that you were commenting on our previous public draft at: 
http://www.w3.org/TR/2005/WD-CDR-20051121

See inline responses below...

Jeff Schiller <codedread@gmail.com> wrote on 01/30/2006 01:59:51 PM:

> 1) "Compound Document Framework 1.0" (http://www.w3.org/TR/CDR/) is
> actually titled "Compound Document by Reference Framework 1.0".  CDI
> is mentioned in this document.

Section "1 Compound Document Framework" is intended to give a general 
overview of 'compound documents', which is why it refers to CDI.  Section 
2 is the section regarding CDR and associated normative text.

We plan to have these sections titled
  1 Compound Document Framework 1.0
  2 Compound Document by Reference (CDR)
 
> 2) 1.5 - missing informative or normative statement

In LC public draft, this section has been removed
 
> 3) Typos/Grammar:
>     1.6 - "therefor" => "therefore"
>     1.6.1 - "An different version number" => "A different version 
number"
> 4) 1.6.1 - you mention TWICE that no specified version number means 
"1.0"

In LC public draft, 1.6.* section has been completely rewritten.

Thanks for your comments.  Please let us know within 2 weeks if this does 
not address your comment.

Regards,
Steve Speicher on behalf of the CDF WG 

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