mobileOK Basic Scheme Version 20080806

Hello mobileOK Fans

The mobileOK Scheme document has had a chequered history, and with 4 
previous owners needs some panel beating, a bit of a re-spray, and a 
full service to get it running properly again.

Against this somewhat uninspiring background, in steps Phil Archer, one 
of the previous owners, who generously completely restructured the 
previous draft and inserted the relevant POWDER related material that 
was previously intended for the mobileOK Labels document that we agreed 
to combine with this one at the Sophia F2F, as well as inserting 
explanatory material as also discussed at the F2F.

I've taken Phil's careful restoration of the bodywork and detailing and 
I'm afraid scratched and dented it a bit again, while correcting some of 
the detail and inserting some editorial notes. I'm afraid that shortage 
of time has not allowed me to make a good job of it or restore some of 
the damage I've inflicted in making those edits.

So what we have here is what must be regarded as a first draft, with an 
outline of what might be in the ultimate document. What's needed is 
comments as to the completeness of its structure, whether it should have 
the appendices it has and also comments about any errors.

In particular, some content can usefully be lifted from the lengthy 
introduction to mobileOK Basic and woven into the fabric of this document.

This is very definitely 2 step forwards and 1 step back. Both Phil and I 
will be on vacation from Friday so it wont be updated for a little while.

Please send your comments to this list.

Jo

http://www.w3.org/2005/MWI/BPWG/Group/Drafts/mobileOK-Trustmark/20080806.html

Received on Wednesday, 6 August 2008 18:03:37 UTC