Date: Fri, 04 Apr 2008 15:29:05 +0200
To: Jo Rabin <jrabin@mtld.mobi>
Cc: MWI BPWG Public <public-bpwg@w3.org>, public-bpwg-ct <public-bpwg-ct@w3.org>
Message-Id: <1207315745.5148.264.camel@localhost>
Hi Jo, Le jeudi 03 avril 2008 à 17:34 +0100, Jo Rabin a écrit : > Please take the time to read this draft, which will be the subject of > a resolution to transition to FPWD on the members' call next Thursday > (2008-04-10). Thanks for all the work on this document! It looks extremely good, and in a really good shape for a FPWD. A few comments below, most of which I don't think needs to be incorporated before FPWD. * the title speaks of "Content Transformation"; the document seems to focus (reasonably) on content transformation in the mobile context; maybe this should be reflected in the title? * The Abstract could be clarified, avoiding to use jargon as much as possible; something like "This document provides guidance for content providers and content transformation proxies on how they can better work together to deliver Web content to mobile devices." * "The overall objective of this document is to provide a means [...] for users to be provided with at least a "functional user experience" of the Web, when mobile" -> is "when mobile" supposed to apply to "users"? I think it should mention mobile devices somewhere. * I offer the attached diagram (in PNG, SVG) to replace the ASCII art of 3.1 Dom > [1] > http://www.w3.org/2005/MWI/BPWG/Group/TaskForces/CT/editors-drafts/Guidelines/080403
(image/png attachment: content-transformation-proxies.png)
(image/svg+xml attachment: content-transformation-proxies.svg)