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RE: New draft 1h of Content Transformation Guidelines - Candidatefor FPWD

From: Jo Rabin <jrabin@mtld.mobi>
Date: Fri, 4 Apr 2008 23:07:15 +0100
Message-ID: <C8FFD98530207F40BD8D2CAD608B50B4DEF3FF@mtldsvr01.DotMobi.local>
To: "Dominique Hazael-Massieux" <dom@w3.org>
Cc: "MWI BPWG Public" <public-bpwg@w3.org>, "public-bpwg-ct" <public-bpwg-ct@w3.org>

Thanks also for this, that ASCII art thing! Oh, yes I agree.

Clarifications and Jargon busting also most helpful.

Jo



> -----Original Message-----
> From: Dominique Hazael-Massieux [mailto:dom@w3.org]
> Sent: 04 April 2008 14:29
> To: Jo Rabin
> Cc: MWI BPWG Public; public-bpwg-ct
> Subject: Re: New draft 1h of Content Transformation Guidelines -
> Candidatefor FPWD
> 
> Hi Jo,
> 
> Le jeudi 03 avril 2008 à 17:34 +0100, Jo Rabin a écrit :
> > Please take the time to read this draft, which will be the subject of
> > a resolution to transition to FPWD on the members' call next Thursday
> > (2008-04-10).
> 
> Thanks for all the work on this document! It looks extremely good, and
> in a really good shape for a FPWD.
> 
> A few comments below, most of which I don't think needs to be
> incorporated before FPWD.
> 
> * the title speaks of "Content Transformation"; the document seems to
> focus (reasonably) on content transformation in the mobile context;
> maybe this should be reflected in the title?
> 
> * The Abstract could be clarified, avoiding to use jargon as much as
> possible; something like
> "This document provides guidance for content providers and content
> transformation proxies on how they can better work together to deliver
> Web content to mobile devices."
> 
> * "The overall objective of this document is to provide a means [...]
> for users to be provided with at least a "functional user experience" of
> the Web, when mobile"
> -> is "when mobile" supposed to apply to "users"? I think it should
> mention mobile devices somewhere.
> 
> * I offer the attached diagram (in PNG, SVG) to replace the ASCII art of
> 3.1
> 
> Dom
> 
> > [1]
> > http://www.w3.org/2005/MWI/BPWG/Group/TaskForces/CT/editors-
> drafts/Guidelines/080403
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