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RE: New draft 1h of Content Transformation Guidelines - Candidatefor FPWD

From: Jo Rabin <jrabin@mtld.mobi>
Date: Thu, 3 Apr 2008 20:53:54 +0100
Message-ID: <C8FFD98530207F40BD8D2CAD608B50B4DEF31F@mtldsvr01.DotMobi.local>
To: "Francois Daoust" <fd@w3.org>
Cc: "public-bpwg-ct" <public-bpwg-ct@w3.org>

Tks francois, I saw you were not on IRC so I went ahead and published anyway, so tks for this, thought you'd be busy packing for London :-).

I will "edit in place".

Jo



> -----Original Message-----
> From: Francois Daoust [mailto:fd@w3.org]
> Sent: 03 April 2008 20:20
> To: Jo Rabin
> Cc: public-bpwg-ct
> Subject: Re: New draft 1h of Content Transformation Guidelines -
> Candidatefor FPWD
> 
> Thanks Jo!
> Nice draft! :)
> 
> Small typo fixes:
> 3.2.3
> first bullet says "the use by transforming proxies"
> second bullet says "the use by THE transforming proxies"
> -> to "the" or not to "the"? Personally, I never know when "the" is
> needed. Anyway.
> 
> 4.1.2
> "if it is still in doubt, issue a request with THE altered headers"
> -> just in case, since - as mentioned above - I never know when "the" is
> needed. Why "the"?
> 
> 4.1.4
> "in the FOR "X-Device-"<original header name>"
> -> in the form?
> 
> 4.2
> "include Vary header containing the value '*'"
> -> missing an "a" before "Vary"?
> 
> In the editorial note, no space between "Link" and "HTTP header"
> 
> François.
> 
> 
> On Thu, 2008-04-03 at 17:34 +0100, Jo Rabin wrote:
> > Please forgive the cross posting.
> >
> >
> >
> > There is now a new draft of the Content Transformation Guidelines [1]
> > available. This draft, or one very similar to it, is the candidate for
> > First Public Working Draft (FPWD) transition request. Although the
> > work of the BPWG CT Task Force has been conducted in public, and each
> > draft has been publically accessible, this transition request
> > represents a formal request for comments from the public at large. The
> > document has been cleaned to allow this to happen, though there are
> > still plenty of editorial comments where the Task Force requests input
> > or has concerns.
> >
> >
> >
> > Please take the time to read this draft, which will be the subject of
> > a resolution to transition to FPWD on the members' call next Thursday
> > (2008-04-10).
> >
> >
> >
> > Thanks
> >
> > Jo
> >
> >
> >
> > [1]
> > http://www.w3.org/2005/MWI/BPWG/Group/TaskForces/CT/editors-
> drafts/Guidelines/080403
> >
> >
> >
> >
> >
> >
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