RE: Content Transformation TF Report for BP Call 2007-09-20

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> From: member-bpwg-request@w3.org [mailto:member-bpwg-request@w3.org]
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> Behalf Of Alan Chuter
> Sent: 20 September 2007 11:21
> To: member-bpwg@w3.org
> Subject: Re: Content Transformation TF Report for BP Call 2007-09-20
> 
> 
> The scope could be wider in Techniques "any non-desktop presentation
of
> content" as there are things like widgets that are desktop and need
> transformation (I believe).
> 


Worth moving the Note under 2 to earlier in the document, I think.


> I agree with the Editorial Note that the techniques could be woven
into
> the problems that are described in the first section of the document.
As I
> read the section "1.2.2 Issues with Content Transformation" I thought
that
> it describes the issues well, but there was a need for a conclusion to
> each issue about "where do we go from here?", to express or restate
the
> issue in terms of a solution rather than an issue. I don't mean to
include
> the solution, which is the subject of the guidelines document, but a
> description of the issue seen from the solution point of view.
> 
> Otherwise the document seems to work well for me.
> 

Thanks Alan, useful feedback and forwarded to public-bpwg-ct

Received on Tuesday, 25 September 2007 18:34:01 UTC