- From: David Booth <david@dbooth.org>
- Date: Wed, 02 Feb 2011 10:04:40 -0500
- To: Jonathan Rees <jar@creativecommons.org>
- Cc: AWWSW TF <public-awwsw@w3.org>
Jonathan,
You need to introduce "S" earlier, where you introduce "R". Something
like: "R contains a description of literary work, S". At present, the
first mention of S is when Bob says "No he didn't, he said it applied to
S".
Also, "u:u" is using a the Turtle shorthand to refer to the URI. For
non-RDF folks I think it may be clearer to just spell out an example
URI, such as http://example/u , and use that in the example Turtle also:
<http://example/u> xhtml:license
<http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by/3.0/>
thanks,
David
On Wed, 2011-02-02 at 05:14 +0000, Jonathan Rees wrote:
> Please read
>
> <http://w3.org/2001/tag/awwsw/2011/status-2011-02.html>
>
> before the corresponding F2F session. If you're short on time, read
> only the use case.
>
> (Is it clear what this URI refers to?)
>
> I may need to fix bugs, in which case I will mark any changed spots clearly.
>
> ACTION-201
>
> Jonathan
>
>
>
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