Re: [xbl-primer] Editorial

Hi David,
Thanks for pointing out those editorial issues. I've updated the
editor's draft.

> In the "Status of this Document" section, the second to last paragraph has
> "public ally" which should be "publically" (or "publicly").

fixed.

> In the "1.2. How the Primer is Structured" section, under "Chapter 3 -
> Form controls", there is a "\" at the end.

fixed.

> Under 1.6.3, before the second example, it says "hasBinding() funciton"
> which should be "hasBinding() function".

fixed.

> Under "1.8 Templates", the paragraph starts: "Templates is used ...". It
> should say "Templates are used ...".
>
> Both "ECMAScript" and "JavaScript" are used. It may be best to stick to
> one term.

Changed all ECMAScript to JavaScript.

> "XmlHttpRequest" should be "XMLHttpRequest" throughout.

Fixed.

If you have any comments about legibility or the content, that would
be great too.

Kind regards,
Marcos
-- 
Marcos Caceres
http://datadriven.com.au

Received on Thursday, 19 July 2007 01:28:49 UTC