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Re: [XBL] XBL 2.0 Abstract

From: Karl Dubost <karl@w3.org>
Date: Fri, 6 Oct 2006 10:11:41 +0900
Message-Id: <ED241A12-A546-48A9-BC30-96F50D664C3C@w3.org>
Cc: public-appformats@w3.org
To: Ian Hickson <ian@hixie.ch>


Le 6 oct. 06 à 07:51, Ian Hickson a écrit :
> On Thu, 5 Oct 2006 karl@w3.org wrote:
>>
>> It is better to not start the [abstract] by "This specification"
>
> Fixed.

Thanks.

>> Reading the abstract, It is not clear what XBL 2.0 is about. Mozilla
>> developer site does a better job.
>
> I'm not convinced the Mozilla developer site does a better job, but  
> I have
> attempted to improve the abstract to combine the better parts of both.
> Please let me know if the new abstract is not satisfactory:
>    http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/~checkout~/2006/xbl2/Overview.html? 
> content-type=text/html

Thanks. The first sentence is better, indeed. associate is also  
easier to understan than map.


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