Re: Call for Consensus: publish FPWD of Web Annotation Model with short name annotation-model; respond by 2 December 2014.

Hi Frederick, all,

Thanks to the editors for putting this document together. As far as a 
FPWD goes, it
looks in good shape already.

I have reviewed part of this specification, and produced a list of
comments/remarks/suggestions (see attachment). They are ordered
according to their occurrences in the document, thus, mixing minor and
more important issues.  If my comments are unclear, apologies, don't
hesitate to ask for clarifications.

I don't expect all issues can be addressed before publishing
FPWD. However, it would be good, for those that are a bit more
fundamental, if a NOTE was inserted in the document indicating that an
issue needs to be investigated.  This would make it clear to the
potential reader about the work in progress nature of the
specification.

Given this caveat, I am happy with going ahead with publication of
FPWD.

Regards,
Luc


On 17/11/2014 14:35, Frederick Hirsch wrote:
> This is a Call for Consensus (CfC)  to publish a First Public Working Draft (FPWD) of the ‘Web Annotation Data Model’ produced by the Annotation Working Group, and adopting the short name of “annotation-model” for this specification [1]
>
> The publication draft is here: http://w3c.github.io/web-annotation/model_fpwd/static.html
>
> Please review and note any concerns on the public list ( public-annotation @ w3.org ). This CfC ends in two weeks, Tuesday  2 December 2014.
>
> Please note that a FPWD is just that, a first public draft, so it need not be perfect and subsequent change is possible; publishing this draft should give it further review and attention.
>
> Please respond to this CfC (even a +1 is useful). Silence will be considered agreement. The anticipated publication date is 14 December.
>
> Thanks
>
> regards, Frederick and Rob
>
> Frederick Hirsch, Nokia
> Rob Sanderson, Stanford
> Co-Chairs W3C Web Annotation WG
>
> [1] please note those on the teleconference 12 November agreed to this short name: http://www.w3.org/2014/11/12-annotation-minutes.html#item04
>
>
>

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