Revised Working Draft

Dear all,

Thank you again for the engaged and polite discussion. I hope that we can
continue to iterate in this fashion over the entire document to insure its
quality, both technically and linguistically.

Paolo and I have synthesized and discussed all of the options, and would
like to propose the following which we feel is accessible, accurate and
hopefully encouraging for adoption across the board.

http://w3c.github.io/web-annotation/model_fpwd/static.html

Further, it includes all of the changes discussed on this week's call:
  * A fully worked example in Appendix C
  * A more concrete example of multiple bodies and targets
  * A column for the JSON key in each vocabulary table
  * Acknowledgement of the community group and the changes from the OACG
final draft
  * We missed the "related" mapping in Appendix B and have added it

If this is okay, Frederick and I would like to proceed to the call for
consensus that the document as a whole is ready to go forwards as the First
Public Working Draft from the group.  We will do this in a separate thread,
so hold your +1s until then please :)

Best,

Rob

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Rob Sanderson
Technology Collaboration Facilitator
Digital Library Systems and Services
Stanford, CA 94305