Re: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-httpbis-h3-websockets-01

Hi Vijay,

Thanks for the comment. I've addressed the issue with
https://github.com/httpwg/http-extensions/pull/1887 and will push a new
revision of the draft soon.

Cheers,

Ryan

On Tue, Jan 11, 2022 at 10:51 AM Vijay Gurbani via Datatracker <
noreply@ietf.org> wrote:

> Reviewer: Vijay Gurbani
> Review result: Ready with Nits
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> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
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> Document: draft-ietf-httpbis-h3-websockets-01
> Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani
> Review Date: 2022-01-11
> IETF LC End Date: 2022-01-19
> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
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> Summary: Ready for publication as a proposed standard.
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> Major issues: 0
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> Minor issues: 0
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> Nits/editorial comments: 1
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> In Section 3, last paragraph: s/If a server which advertises/If a server
> that advertises/
> (Reason: Restrictive clauses should use "that" [1]).
> [1] https://www.dictionary.com/e/that-vs-which/
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> Thanks,
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> - vijay
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