- From: Julian Reschke <julian.reschke@gmx.de>
- Date: Fri, 27 Aug 2021 18:37:41 +0200
- To: ietf-http-wg@w3.org
Am 23.07.2021 um 02:05 schrieb Mark Nottingham: > ... A few more nits: Abstract "HTTP/2 enables a more efficient use of network resources and a reduced perception of latency by introducing field compression..." Maybe drop "perception of"...? 1. First occurance of TCP should have the bibl. reference. 4.1 s/and semantics of the frame./and semantics of the frame payload/? 5. "The order in which frames are sent on a stream is significant" That makes it sound like only the order *within* a stream is significant, and that would be incorrect, right? 5.1 Maybe move legend out of artwork. Best regards, Julian PS: I'll be happy to create PRs if desired.
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