- From: Mark Nottingham <mnot@mnot.net>
- Date: Thu, 20 Dec 2018 16:12:49 +1100
- To: Warren Kumari <warren@kumari.net>
- Cc: The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>, draft-ietf-httpbis-cdn-loop@ietf.org, Patrick McManus <mcmanus@ducksong.com>, Tommy Pauly <tpauly@apple.com>, httpbis-chairs@ietf.org, ietf-http-wg@w3.org
Hi Warren, > On 20 Dec 2018, at 9:51 am, Warren Kumari <warren@kumari.net> wrote: > > I have only a small nit: > "The threat model that the CDN-Loop header field addresses is a customer who is > attempting to attack a service provider by configuring a forwarding loop by > accident or malice. " > > The "attempting to attack ... by accident" reads oddly to me. It feel to me > that "attempting" implies intent, and I don't see how you can accidentally > intend to attack. Perhaps "The threat model that the CDN-Loop header field > addresses is a customer who is attacking a service provider by configuring a > forwarding loop by accident or malice. " (or "causing an attack" or "negative > impact"). > > Anyway, this is just a minor point, perhaps try address it if you are editing > anyway... I've incorporated that; thanks. -- Mark Nottingham https://www.mnot.net/
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