Re: New Version Notification for draft-bishop-httpbis-extended-settings-00.txt from Dee Holtsclaw on 2016-06-16 (ietf-http-wg@w3.org from April to June 2016)

From: Dee Holtsclaw <ldholtsclaw@gmail.com>
Date: Thu, 16 Jun 2016 17:09:55 -0400
To: Mark Nottingham <mnot@mnot.net>
Cc: Mike Bishop <Michael.Bishop@microsoft.com>, HTTP Working Group <ietf-http-wg@w3.org>
Message-ID: <CAEmy+mndObvDu==9vDeNTXzEd3cBEqYa8LLxmTPutXp1gBVg7w@mail.gmail.com>

Picking nits, but shouldn't section 6's first paragraph read as follows:

   This draft establishes one new registry and *adds* three entries across
   two existing registries.

Existing text:

   This draft establishes one new registry and add three entries across
   two existing registries.


Otherwise it seems to be reasonable and complete to me. Nice work IMHO.

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Received on Thursday, 16 June 2016 21:10:24 UTC