Re: AD review of draft-ietf-httpbis-cice-01

I know this is picking nits, but shouldn't the first sentence in section 5
(Deployment Considerations) have "already" and "are" transposed? In other
words, this:

Servers that do not support content codings in requests *are already*
required to fail a request that does use a content coding.

Instead of this (current text):

Servers that do not support content codings in requests already are
required to fail a request that does use a content coding.

I would also suggest dropping the "does" in favor of simply "uses":

Servers that do not support content codings in requests are already
required to fail a request that uses a content coding.

Apologies in advance for nitpicking.

Received on Wednesday, 22 July 2015 15:33:34 UTC