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Re: WGLC: p7 editorial nits

From: Julian Reschke <julian.reschke@gmx.de>
Date: Tue, 19 Mar 2013 16:22:45 +0100
Message-ID: <514882C5.2000206@gmx.de>
To: Ken Murchison <murch@andrew.cmu.edu>
CC: ietf-http-wg@w3.org
On 2013-03-19 15:12, Ken Murchison wrote:
> Hi All,
>
> The document seems to use the term "mechanism" interchangeably to mean 3
> different things: the framework described by p7, auth schemes that use
> this framework, and different forms of
> authentication/credential-caching/protection-space-establishment that
> are outside the scope of the document.  I think the following changes
> would make the text more consistent throughout.
>
> Sec 1, para 2:  "mechanisms" -> "schemes"
>
> Sec 2.1, para 1: "mechanism" -> "framework"
>
> Sec 2.1, second last para: change first occurrance of "mechanism" to
> "framework".  All others remain as-is.
>
> Regards,
> Ken

Good catch. -> <http://trac.tools.ietf.org/wg/httpbis/trac/changeset/2211>

Best regards, Julian
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