Comments on Section 6.1

• From: David Booth <david@dbooth.org>
• Date: Sat, 06 Nov 2010 15:15:57 -0400
• To: HTTP Working Group <ietf-http-wg@w3.org>
• Message-ID: <1289070958.5492.7829.camel@dbooth-laptop>

Comments on Section 6.1:
http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-httpbis-p2-semantics-12#section-6.1 

1. The first sentence says: "It is sometimes necessary to determine an
identifier for the resource associated with a representation".  But
rules 1-3 only say what *resource* is associated with the
representation, rather than saying what the *identifier* is.

2. Rule 2 uses the term "target".  Should that be "target resource"?



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Cleveland Clinic (contractor)
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Received on Saturday, 6 November 2010 19:16:26 UTC